单击此处编辑母版标题样式单击此处编辑母版文本样式第二级第三级第四级第五级海淀·空中课堂（初中）单击此处编辑母版标题样式单击此处编辑母版文本样式第二级第三级第四级第五级海淀·空中课堂（初中）中考满分作文突破九年级英语学科1写作的“CLEAR”原则2“CLEAR”原则:题目2写作指导3目录CONTENTS迁移练习“CLEAR”原则01什么是“CLEAR”原则？中考作文评分标准9-10分完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。6-8分完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。4-5分部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。0-3分与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。满分作文标准完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全句式多样，词汇丰富语言准确语意连贯，具有逻辑性全Complete顺Logical准Accurate富Rich书写美观美Enjoyable“CLEAR”原则一模题目2写作指导02如何应用“CLEAR”原则写好作文？2022年海淀一模题目2“凡事预则立，不预则废。”某英文网站正在开展主题为“做一个有准备的人”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈是什么经历让你意识到准备的重要性，以及你从中获得的益处。提示词语：competition,worried,improve,confidence,proud提示问题：●Whatexperiencetaughtyoutheimportanceofpreparation?Pleasedescribeit.●Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromtheexperience?Beingpreparedisimportant.________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、全Complete完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。审题立意正向、积极符合新时代中学生的身份？人称：做一个有准备的人第一人称（I)谈论经历用一般过去时;获得的益处可用一般现在时/现在完成时Whatexperiencetaughtyoutheimportanceofpreparation?Pleasedescribeit.Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromtheexperience?主题：时态：要点：“凡事预则立，不预则废。”某英文网站正在开展主题为“做一个有准备的人”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈是什么经历让你意识到准备的重要性，以及你从中获得的益处。提示词语：competition,worried,improve,confidence,proud提示问题：●Whatexperiencetaughtyoutheimportanceofpreparation?Pleasedescribeit.●Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromtheexperience?列提纲（确定结构与详略）IExperienceBenefits...............一般过去时一般现在时/现在完成时人称提示词语：competition,worried,improve,confidence,proud什么经历让你意识到准备的重要性？成功经历——准备充分——成功——认识到准备的重要性失败经历——准备不充分——不成功——认识到准备的重要性Experience成功经历What?How?Result?geographycompetitionwenttothelibraryfullypreparedaskedteachersforhelpwontheprizeworriedatfirstimproved你从中获得的益处?比赛获奖并意识到做准备的重要性。只有准备充分我们才能克服困难取得成功。Benefits继续坚持做准备的好习惯。wontheprizeandrealizedtheimportanceofpreparationpreparationcanhelpusovercomethedifficultiescontinuetobeprepared列提纲（确定结构与详略）IExperienceBenefits一般现在时一般现在时/现在完成时人称Result?geographycompetitionwenttothelibraryfullypreparedaskedteachersforhelpwontheprizefeltworriedatfirstimprovedwontheprizeandrealizedtheimportanceofpreparationpreparationcanhelpusovercomethedifficultiescontinuetobeprepared二、顺Logical语意连贯，具有逻辑性。Firstofall,Tobeginwith,Firstly,Atfirst,IntheFirstplace,...Inthesecondplace,What’smore,Inaddition,Next,...Finally,Atlast,Lastbutnotleast,...Ononehand,...Ontheotherhand,...notonly...,butalso...三方面Linkingwords两方面...What’smore,/Inaddition...Beingpreparedisimportant.Lastyear,Iattendedageographycompetition.Ifeltworriedatfirst.ButIdidn’tgiveup.Iwenttothelibrarytoreadallkindsofgeographybooks.Ialsoaskedtheteachersforhelp.Finally,Ifinishedallthetaskswithconfidence.Iwonthesecondplace,andmygeographygradealsoimproved.Ihavegotsomebenefitsfrommyexperience.Firstly,Inotonlywontheprize,butalsorealizedtheimportanceofpreparation.Inaddition,Iknowthatpreparationcanhelpusovercomethedifficulties.SoIwillcontinuetomakefullpreparationwhenIfacechallenges.二档文：6-8分三、准Accurate语言准确语法错误：拼写、时态、名词单复数、固定搭配、主谓一致等。四、富Rich句式多样，词汇丰富。句型——短语——词句子类型引导词定语从句关系代词:who,which,that关系副词:when,where,why非限定性定语从句:which状语从句时间:when,while,as原因:because,since条件:if,unless目的:sothat,inorderthat结果:so...that...让步:although,evenif/eventhough其他句型Only...canwe...It’sadj.forsb.todosth.Therebe...源于积累Finally,Iwonthesecondplace,andmygeographygradealsoimproved.Beingpreparedisimportant.Lastyear,Iattendedageographycompetition.Ifeltworriedatfirst.ButIdidn’tgiveup.Iwenttothelibrarytoreadallkindsofgeographybooks.Ialsoaskedtheteachersforhelp.Finally,Ifinishedallthetaskswithconfidence.Iwonthesecondplace,andmygeographygradealsoimproved.Beingpreparedisimportant.IhavelearneditthroughmyexperienceinageographycompetitionwhichIparticipatedinlastyear.IfeltworriedatfirstbecauseIwasweakinit.However,insteadofgivingup,Iburiedmyselfinthelibrarytogooverallkindsofgeographybooks.Ispenthoursdiscussingwithteachersinordertosolvemyquestions.Therefore,withfullpreparation,IfeltIcouldfaceanychallengesconfidentlywhenIstoodonthestage.Ihavegotsomebenefitsfrommyexperience.Firstly,Inotonlywontheprize,butalsorealizedtheimportanceofpreparation.Iknowthatpreparationcanhelpusovercomethedifficulties.SoIwillcontinuetomakefullpreparationwhenIfacechallenges.Ihavegotaseriesofbenefitsfrommyexperience.Firstofall,thisexperiencehasalastinginfluenceonme.Inotonlywontheprize,butalsorealizedtheimportanceofpreparation.Besides,Iknowthatonlybybeingfullypreparedcanwemakedifficultiesthesteppingstoneforsuccess.SoIwillcertainlycontinuetomakefullpreparationwhenIfacechallengesinthefuture.Beingpreparedisimportant.IhavelearneditthroughmyexperienceinageographycompetitionwhichIparticipatedinlastyear.IfeltworriedatfirstbecauseIwasweakinit.However,insteadofgivingup,Iburiedmyselfinthelibrarytogooverallkindsofgeographybooks.Ispenthoursdiscussingwithteachersinordertosolvemyquestions.Therefore,withfullpreparation,IfeltIcouldfaceanychallengesconfidentlywhenIstoodonthestage.Finally,Iwonthesecondplace,andmygeographygradealsoimproved.Ihavegotaseriesofbenefitsfrommyexperience.Firstofall,thisexperiencehasalastinginfluenceon